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Step 10 - Blending Your "First Draft"

Topic - George Washington

When you go back and reread your "First Draft", you will probably find that some of it doesn't sound well. So what you need to do is to blend the sentences together by rewriting them so that each sentence naturally flows into the next and makes sense together. In the case with George Washington above, some of it before was not clear about when it happened so a little rewriting and a few extra words fixes the problem.

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